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I cannot hear you sing your joyful songs
I cannot see your beautiful face
I cannot smell your sweet fragrance
I cannot feel your kind embrace
I cannot taste your sugar lips
as they quickly brush against mine
All is lost, you are no more
Leaving me to pay this hefty fine
I can only see darkness
I can only hear my tears
I can only smell my dripping blood
I can only feel my fears
My tongue, it burns with the taste of hate
The hate I felt so long
All is lost, I am no more
And all my senses are gone
I cannot see your beautiful face
I cannot smell your sweet fragrance
I cannot feel your kind embrace
I cannot taste your sugar lips
as they quickly brush against mine
All is lost, you are no more
Leaving me to pay this hefty fine
I can only see darkness
I can only hear my tears
I can only smell my dripping blood
I can only feel my fears
My tongue, it burns with the taste of hate
The hate I felt so long
All is lost, I am no more
And all my senses are gone
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This is something that just came to my mind while talking to one of my friends.
So, I wrote it down and...
TADA
This poem was born!
Its has a darkish mood to it, and it is quite sad in my oppinion.
There is a theme to the poem, but, I won't post it!
(I find it ruins the poems for readers when they already know what its about! Its better to let the reader use their imagination)
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I wasn't quite sure on which Category to put this under!
So, if you think it should be in a certain Category, please let me know!
Thanks
So, I wrote it down and...
TADA
This poem was born!
Its has a darkish mood to it, and it is quite sad in my oppinion.
There is a theme to the poem, but, I won't post it!
(I find it ruins the poems for readers when they already know what its about! Its better to let the reader use their imagination)
----
I wasn't quite sure on which Category to put this under!
So, if you think it should be in a certain Category, please let me know!
Thanks
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Does anyone else sing poems? Like when reading it you sing it in your head? Thats what I do.
Woah. Like, Mory, this is amazing! I usually don't like poems after reading such horrible ones at school (my english teacher isn't that good at english).
"As they quickly brush against mine. All is lost, you are no more. Leaving me to pay this hefty fine" that was my favortive part, it rhymed so well and was a clever thingt to say, I wouldn't be able to think of that on the spot.
So its about your boyfriend? I never really did belive in that stuff, everytime I see a couple I always feel a little sick. It just seemed like it was always giving presents and then breaking up and then joining back together with more presents. I just never got it. But hey, I just a little grumpy puppy waiting to get Animal Crossing over and done with (The wii one).
Woah. Like, Mory, this is amazing! I usually don't like poems after reading such horrible ones at school (my english teacher isn't that good at english).
"As they quickly brush against mine. All is lost, you are no more. Leaving me to pay this hefty fine" that was my favortive part, it rhymed so well and was a clever thingt to say, I wouldn't be able to think of that on the spot.
So its about your boyfriend? I never really did belive in that stuff, everytime I see a couple I always feel a little sick. It just seemed like it was always giving presents and then breaking up and then joining back together with more presents. I just never got it. But hey, I just a little grumpy puppy waiting to get Animal Crossing over and done with (The wii one).